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The Brand on the Wrong Hip in My Husband's Photo (Part 2 Ending)

Marie did not sleep. At five, she made coffee and went out to the barn in her robe and Ray's old barn coat.

The branding irons hung on the wall in the tack room where Ray had hung them every spring for fifty years. She took down the old T-bar iron and carried it into the kitchen and set it on the table beside the photograph.

Then she got out the family photo albums.

There were eleven of them, and she had made every one. Ray on horseback at every age. Ray at the spring branding with the boys. Ray on Boudin in 1992, on the levee, with Luc riding behind him. In every picture, the brand was on the horse's left hip. In every picture, Ray wore his wedding ring on his left hand.

She picked up the photograph Danielle had brought and looked at Ray's hands on the little girl's waist.

The ring was on his right hand.

And Ray's smile, his slow, crooked smile, went up on the left side of his face. In fifty years of photographs, it had always gone up on the right.

* * *

Luc came down at seven and found her at the table with the albums spread out, the branding iron on top, and the photograph beside it.

"Mama?"

"Sit down," Marie said. "Look at this."

She showed him. The brand on the wrong hip. The ring on the wrong hand. The smile on the wrong side.

Luc looked for a long time. Then he picked up his phone, took a picture of Danielle's photograph, and flipped it on the screen.

Brand on the left hip. Ring on the left hand. Smile on the right.

It was Ray. It was absolutely Ray. It was simply backward.

"Somebody flipped it," Luc said slowly. "Like a mirror. Why would somebody flip a picture?"

Marie reached for the album marked 1990 to 1994 and turned the pages until she found it.

There it was. Ray on Boudin, in front of the old cypress corral at the Broussard place where they used to work cattle, smiling, with his arm around a little girl of four in a red shirt.

It was their neighbor's granddaughter, Amy Broussard. Amy was forty now and taught kindergarten in Abbeville. Marie had taken the picture herself at a church picnic in 1993.

She had put a copy of it on the internet two years ago, when Andre set up a page for the parish history society.

* * *

"You flip a picture," Luc said, "so the original won't come up if somebody searches for it."

He was very quiet. He was very angry.

"I'm calling the sheriff," he said.

"No," Marie said. "I'm calling Danielle."

* * *

Danielle Guidry came to the house at noon. She came alone. She sat at the kitchen table where Marie told her to sit, across from the branding iron and the open albums, and when Marie slid the two photographs across the table to her, the original and the flipped one, side by side, she did not say a word for a long time.

Then she began to cry. Not the pretty, red-eyed crying from the funeral. The other kind.

"I'm sorry," she said. "I'm so sorry."

"Who put you up to it?" Marie asked.

"My boyfriend. Kyle." Danielle wiped her face. "He does this. He reads the obituaries. Older men who owned land, no daughters. He finds a picture and fixes it up on his computer. He said the family always settles. He said a small-town family never wants a DNA fight." She looked down. "I owe him money. A lot. I thought if I did this one, he'd let me go."

Marie looked at her for a long while.

Luc stood by the door with his arms folded and his phone in his hand. Andre had come down the stairs and stood behind his mother's chair.

"Where's your mama really?" Marie asked.

"Baton Rouge," Danielle whispered. "She's alive. She doesn't know about any of this."

* * *

Marie had buried a daughter in 1979. Celeste would have been forty-seven this year. She had thought about that every day of the funeral, watching this girl across the aisle.

"Here's what's going to happen," Marie said. "My son the lawyer is going to call the sheriff. Not about you. About Kyle, and all the families he's done this to. And you're going to sit with a deputy this afternoon and tell him everything."

Danielle went white.

"You'll be a witness, not a defendant, if Luc has anything to say about it. And he will." Marie looked at her son. Luc nodded once, slowly.

"And then," Marie said, "you're going to call your mama in Baton Rouge. And you're going to go home."

Danielle stared at her. "Why would you help me?"

"Because I had a girl once," Marie said. "And if she'd ever got herself into a mess like this, I'd want some old woman to send her home."

* * *

The sheriff's office in Abbeville arrested Kyle Breaux in January. Five other families in three parishes had paid him to go away.

Danielle testified. Then she went home to her mother in Baton Rouge.

In March, a card came in the mail. It was a picture of a little girl on a pony at a fair, with a note on the back in careful handwriting.

My niece. Her first horse. The brand's on the left hip. Thank you, Mrs. Thibodeaux.

Marie put the card in the 2026 album, on the first page, next to a photograph of Ray's old T-bar iron hanging back on its nail in the tack room, where Ray had hung it for fifty springs, reading the right way around.

* * *
โ€” The End โ€”
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